Jake, whilst I enjoy looking at your illustrations, we can both see that art may not be a strength for you - this is fine, but in order to combat this, you must add detail to your documents. The point of storyboarding is so that the examiner can see that you have considered elements of 'mise-en-scene' as you would in an industry scenario, and can plan for them. You must add more detail to this and your flat plans in terms of layout/ costume/ props/ lighting etc. You must also analyse your q'aires - what did you learn that will influence your future choices? You should have included a montage of images, I can't see this and hope that it magically appears before the end of next week?! In addition, your spelling is awful (particularly in customer profile) check this and prelim task images, put those into photobucket as it looks better. You are currently working at Level 3, but could easily be at the top of this level and pushing level 4 with care and effort. Happy New Year. Miss L
Jake, whilst I enjoy looking at your illustrations, we can both see that art may not be a strength for you - this is fine, but in order to combat this, you must add detail to your documents. The point of storyboarding is so that the examiner can see that you have considered elements of 'mise-en-scene' as you would in an industry scenario, and can plan for them. You must add more detail to this and your flat plans in terms of layout/ costume/ props/ lighting etc. You must also analyse your q'aires - what did you learn that will influence your future choices? You should have included a montage of images, I can't see this and hope that it magically appears before the end of next week?! In addition, your spelling is awful (particularly in customer profile) check this and prelim task images, put those into photobucket as it looks better. You are currently working at Level 3, but could easily be at the top of this level and pushing level 4 with care and effort. Happy New Year. Miss L
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